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Snafu4977

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Its got to finish now, i know its fantasy but all that's left is for Dan to get out, tell Sarah what is going on, she is either horrified and goes home with Dan and they try to sort out their lives or she chooses Lester.
No way can they carry on with their games, now Dan has figured some things out.
Yes its a fictional story but it's losing all sense of reality with each new chapter.
 
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adamblack144

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That's a devious plan. Although Sarah still obviously loves Dan and doesn't love Lester so why wouldnt she freak out when she speaks to her husband and he tells her his version? I'm curious how it'll be resolved. Dan is furious and will have to go scorched earth to get revenge. He can't back down at this point. Is money enough to keep them in their deal with Lester?
 
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psybre said:
Lester gave Sarah the wrong room number. There is no way he is escaping fate when Sarah learns how he manipulated her and Dan. Her more upright bipolar personality will always take Dan’s side. Plus Dan is beginning to figure out stuff, he should drink more and often, adds IQ points to him.
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I bet he tells her that their room was changed by the hotel and he gave Dan the number but he wigged out on the third floor instead. Who will she believe? Never know the way Don is writing it as they have already had her decide once that she trusted Lester more than Dan.
 
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Chillie_Willie said:
Lester plans to keep Sarah busy in that hotel bedroom until it’s time to return to Middleton for work. Don hasn’t revealed Lester‘s plan to us on how he will make Dan look feeble and weak in Sarah’s eyes, but Lester sure did target their finances . I’m sure Lester is quite aware of their financial predicament so stick Dan with paying the expensive meals and possible hotel rooms. Dan won’t be released on his own recognizance. He could receive other charges which could keep him jailed till court Monday morning if the hotel persists. One is the public intoxication charge but the DA could tack on disturbing the peace. Which could lead into possible jail time, fines and community service for Dan. I’m sure the bail and potential lawyer fees will be a unnecessary expense to their bank account, especially with Dan working under government contracts. Sarah will worry as their savings and checking account, house, car, kids’ private school tuition, and her comfortable lifestyle suffer. She already unhappy not being to buy new clothes or getting to spend what she wants. With Dan now stuck in Chicago until the trial date but I’m sure with Lester‘s impending move has will have a deal to relieve their financial burden of Dan being homeless. Lester will pay the rent in Chicago, but in exchange Sarah will need to offer her bed and companionship to Lester while he’s in Middleton. Hey now ride share buddies. Ultimately Sarah will see Lester as the stable part in her life who can provide for her and gives her what she wants sexually.
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Dan could actually lose the government contracts as he would no longer pass a background check: his finances are going south and that makes him a possible target for bribery and an arrest for anything opens him up for blackmail.
 
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Psiber@mauvais

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adamblack144 said:
That's a devious plan. Although Sarah still obviously loves Dan and doesn't love Lester so why wouldnt she freak out when she speaks to her husband and he tells her his version? I'm curious how it'll be resolved. Dan is furious and will have to go scorched earth to get revenge. He can't back down at this point. Is money enough to keep them in their deal with Lester?
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And will he seem paranoid as he, at times, appears to be cracking under the pressure of everything.
 
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even if Lester suddenly disappears, Sara and Dan's life will be impossible in the future. So the story cannot have a good ending in principle.
 
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Oresttitos said:
even if Lester suddenly disappears, Sara and Dan's life will be impossible in the future. So the story cannot have a good ending in principle.
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That's true., I was thinking the same thing. Even if Lester were to disappear at this point, there's no way Sarah and Dan could go back to who they were as a family. So they'll end up having an arrangement that includes Lester...which will ultimately result in Sarah and Lester being a couple, and Dan a willing or unwilling cuckold.
 
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I’m starting to think that Sarah finally takes it up the ass in the next chapter, unless Don extends this chapter in the final version. There were mentions previously of Lester saving the ass fucking for a special private date. Jesse gets kicked out, and a marathon ass session ensues because it is, after all, the happy couples engagement night… I do agree though that the storyline is dragging and needs to be progressed somewhat, a lot of repetition and no progress on the relationship between Lester and Sarah. Is she going to actually fall in love with him? I am invested in this story, but Don needs to iron out the stagnating plot line.
 
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Anonmonkey87 said:
I’m starting to think that Sarah finally takes it up the ass in the next chapter, unless Don extends this chapter in the final version. There were mentions previously of Lester saving the ass fucking for a special private date. Jesse gets kicked out, and a marathon ass session ensues because it is, after all, the happy couples engagement night… I do agree though that the storyline is dragging and needs to be progressed somewhat, a lot of repetition and no progress on the relationship between Lester and Sarah. Is she going to actually fall in love with him? I am invested in this story, but Don needs to iron out the stagnating plot line.
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It doesn't really matter if Sarah falls in love with Lester, especially in the long run. And even if pregnant, it still leads to the collapse of the relationship. This story cannot and should not have a happy ending. I think Don will leave the ending in limbo so that everyone can figure it out for themselves to the extent of their debauchery.
 
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Oresttitos said:
It doesn't really matter if Sarah falls in love with Lester, especially in the long run. And even if pregnant, it still leads to the collapse of the relationship. This story cannot and should not have a happy ending. I think Don will leave the ending in limbo so that everyone can figure it out for themselves to the extent of their debauchery.
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If this was a short story sure leave the finale open ended like Don did in Detestable Liaisons where the reader imagined what happens next. People are emotionally invested in Toxic Attraction and want to see what happens to the three good or bad. My desire is having Sarah pregnant with Lester’s baby and gradually fall in love with or at least submit to him at the end. I don’t how Lester will react if Sarah truly fell in love with him. Is he really capable of love or did the person who turned him this way screwed him good.
 
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Dude, I'm not saying that black people are jerks and all white people are racists.
I say that it is this black jerk and he is no different from the white Lester, Bert, Byron, Jesse and Soul. I also say that it is these white racists who will later change their views on blacks and the wife will marry a black man because he is better than a white one.
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No. That's exactly what you are saying
 
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I agree. I hope the story leads to Sarah losing trust with Dan, both financially and because he becomes deranged. She falls in love with Lester and they become a couple. His ultimate conquest isn't just sex, but making her submit to him completely
 
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I hope someone who is kind and takes pity upon the masses will drop it here, soon. I sincerely hope for a change within and what the hell, miracles can happen, my alma-mater won their season-ender 52-0 and the NFL team I was raised to root for, won yesterday for the first time in years. Don can make this work and better in a better way.
 
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I was going to upload it tomorrow but couldn’t hide the disappointment. Don is still stuck in a holding pattern. He didn’t make any revisions to the alpha when it came to Sarah and Lester’s relationship. Even the conversation after Lester proposed was meh. Don did add some context in several places from the alpha, but not where I was hoping which was the round two scene.

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Ok I said I'd be patient until the final version but this was an awful chapter. Literally no progression and just another cock that Sarah will never fuck again. Meaningless sex. He refuses to allow any more than few sentences of dialogue between Lester and Sarah. This updated version added nothing. I really like this story but having to wait a month for the same chapter over and over us getting boring.
 
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It is like wading through treacle, reading TA, only so many ways you can write a sex scene, all the hospital and Lincoln group stuff is fluff and nonsense to pad out a 6 or 7 chapter story to keep raking in the cash.

Its getting more unbelievable with each update.
 
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Chillie_Willie said:
I was going to upload it tomorrow but couldn’t hide the disappointment. Don is still stuck in a holding pattern. He didn’t make any revisions to the alpha when it came to Sarah and Lester’s relationship. Even the conversation after Lester proposed was meh. Don did add some context in several places from the alpha, but not where I was hoping which was the round two scene.

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Thank you, sir, you are a scholar and a gentleman.
 
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