Eenteresting
It was pretty good, ok plot, ok music.
Thing is, it seemed a bit rushed. Now, i havn't made any flash yet myself, but i think that it could have been a bit smoother. Maybe it's my comp, it's been weird today.
The beginning menu button's sound comes late.
I agree with the guy under me, it needs a bit of work as far as her learning how to do stuff is concerned.
its ur computer. throw it away.
ach!
You did such a good job with the camera angles and the drawing/shading but...god it seemed that the animation of the characters was done by someone who just learned out to tween yesterday.... I sorta liked the plot but as a personal preference I like it more when time is spent building the characters more so I can relate to them, even if that doesn't include any spiffy animation.
fix the POV
I like your animation style. Everything seems to stick tight into composition - music, sounds, drawings. Your story is too deep to slice it into so small chunks: girl was captured, killed some aliens, and now she's on the moon. Each episode should carry more than this.
One thing that was annoying is camera - I felt like I'm watching it from some moving string, coudn't focus on what's going on in the scenes.
pretty good...
I liked it but there needs to be more of a story line and you could do a little better on the motion of the characters.. 8 points!
there is a story, you just saw a piece of it.
Epical!
Have you seen Cloverfield?
The camera work and lack of information and 'slow bits' really reminds me about it, but not a bad thing. I think this will become a very promesing series, just beware for all the corny sci-fi steriotypes.
Animation looks very nice, although it could be more fluent.
aaaaand! I hope following parts will be longer!
